Squeaky Clean

Tweet 'Ello Mates *In my Australian accent* Hope you're having a happy hump day.
Right now I'm in my character design class on break. I just got done presenting my 3 characters - The Cali Valley Girls (earlier post).
[SideNote: I have the same character design instructor as my gesture drawing class the day before. So, with that being said, I showed her my 3 drawings yesterday and she told me to clean up the line quality before today (when the homework was due). On an extreme note, she wanted more of "The Incredibles" cleanliness, less of "Ed, Edd n Eddy." Lol! Because I had already completed all 3 she required that I just clean one of them; the "Dom" character. She chose Dom because of the pose.]
Fast-forward to today's class, I presented all three characters (with the modified Dom character). Here's the new Dom:



I modified the design in Adobe Illustrator.
What do you think? The original OR the modified STYLIZED version? Thoughts? Thanks :)
xoxoS.dotBerry

Character Design Homework

Tweet Soooo tonight I worked on my Character Design homework!

I had to create three stylized characters.

I was inspired by my two girls: Angie Marie and Dom...aaand myself. :)

I initially thought that if I were to create a cartoon on us, it'd be called "The Valley Girls," since we are all "technically" valley girls. Then I thought that "Cali Girls" would be a cute name as well. Soooo I'm in between both names.

Which title do you like better? And what do you think about the designs?

Let me know your thoughts!

xoxo Muah! S.dotBerry